Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, August 26, 2019
26.08.19 All about my family and me
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Hi Santriana It's Brooke.s and That is a cool Slide about your family and It's cool That you like writing about your family. Good job!
ReplyDeletekia ora Santriana my name is Clio I am from Parkiew Parua School. I like how you included your star sign and described your 7 yer old cousin she sounds very kind and nice to be around your 2 year old brother reminds me of my little sister good job from Clio.
ReplyDeleteHi Santirana It's Stella and i like how you put a slide about your family. it has alot of detail and you put a lot of writing.
ReplyDeletewell done on your writing but try and take out that word that isn't really appropriate
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